Never imagined this situation,

I will have to face so much frustration.

Where I just loved purely,

Where my friendship was true surely.

People for whom I cared,

Feelings with whom I shared.

Gave me pain and heartbreak,

I can’t believe they were so fake.

The story was amazing,

Before I got to know he was double dating.

I wasn’t able to follow him,

Told my curly haired bestfriend to keep an eye on him.

After some days everything seemed normal,

Untill and unless it was the day of formal

Me and my friends bunked this fest, (except my bestfriend)

For the enjoyment to the best.

There I saw him with a girl

Having hair curled .

Hands in hands ;hugging each other,

After kissing and cuddling further.

As they turned around,

You won’t believe what I found.

My boyfriend was dating no one else ,

But my best friend ; oops tears fells.

With clapping hands

I greeted them.

Good job my friends,

For this amazing planned betrayal.


A true friend or love is someone who are there for you in you tough situations and don’t create it.

A true friend or partner is someone who keeps their promises not break them with your hear.

A true friend or love is someone who neither leads nor follows, but walks with you don’t be the reason for you too stand alone.

So people choose people in your life wisely, whether whoever he / she is.

Thank you!

Hope you people are enjoying reading my blogs and they are helping in or relatable to your situations.

Regards:- Insiya Patanwala

By insiya patanwala

As i cant hide my feelings anymore , so i turned them into Adorable Verses i just dont write to share my feelings it is the reason i live . dream to publish my own novel ameen!

16 replies on “THE PLANNED BETRAYAL”

Nice poem.
You said it at the end, choose the people you’re going to associate with wisely (paraphrasing here) and even those will disappoint you. Just part of life. You take it in for a short time, and you keep moving without looking back.


Great words… Truly touching and emotional
Continue writing, don’t stop.
At last of the para, paraphrasing truly touched
I hope i choose my friends and mates wisely👍😎

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