At the age of sixteen

I was blushing

I was in love

At the first sight !

Didn’t knew to do what

Didn’t knew to say what

I was just still

At the first sight !!

Met you at school

And then at college

But I was shy

To share my feelings with you

Suddenly you came close to me

I came close to you

You loved me

And I loved you too

But one day

You left me

I was alone

All alone

I was depressed

Because of stress

Thought of attempting suicide

Just because of the first love sight

I closed my eyes

Had a blade in hand

And what I saw in my eyes

Were my mom and dad


A heart touching poem with an unexpected ending what do you think about it ?
Waiting for positive reviews….

By insiya patanwala

As i cant hide my feelings anymore , so i turned them into Adorable Verses i just dont write to share my feelings it is the reason i live . dream to publish my own novel ameen!

27 replies on “LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT”

It’s true some people love to someone to cheat them and left with alone , it’s very sad to I say now today love become business and business become love but it’s fact that true love never die , true love never left alone

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Oh,most heart touching and dear,love is immortal feeling to becoming beautiful the should feel obliged that your lover taught the lesson of love may be he has have not right to take your life because it is blessed gift of should spread the love all over and all places🌷please be the rose to fragrant all world.

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