Beautiful dream

My eyes were close

Suddenly came blows
U woke me with a rose
Open hair without bows
We just had a fight
U bought a mango bite
U are just mine , right?
Together we were bright
U turned off the light
U were out of my sight
Oh it was my dream night
Broke due to sun bright


By insiya patanwala

As i cant hide my feelings anymore , so i turned them into Adorable Verses i just dont write to share my feelings it is the reason i live . dream to publish my own novel ameen!

18 replies on “Beautiful dream”

Lines were well written, keep it up. Dont stop. Reach at the level where you can write this quality lines everyday before sleeping off.

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